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Unrequited Love
« on: July 08 2005, 01:44 am »
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Unrequited Love

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Unexpected things exposed leads to more effective results than people can figure. So what will happen if 'he' found out what 'she' has been keeping inside? Love, pain and tragedy...
« Last Edit: July 15 2005, 05:12 pm by SLi »

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Re: Unrequited Love
« Reply #1 on: July 08 2005, 08:40 am »
Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'
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Re: Unrequited Love
« Reply #2 on: July 09 2005, 02:00 am »
lol, I know. I keep having a problem with that. :P I'll fix it (whenI start practicing keyboard again :X)

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Re: Unrequited Love
« Reply #3 on: September 16 2006, 06:03 pm »
Plz keep writing don't let this die!
~Regular occurences at my School~
Friend:" You do know that your not sopposed to read magna for your reading list?"
Me: " Um.... um.... yea, but what they don't know can't hurt them!"
    Art teacher(with german/french accent)" NO!!! No Anime eyes! I hate them! Make recular eyes on your kite!"
Me: Grumble....Grumble.... Art Teach:" What was that!?" Me: "Nothing..."
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Friend:" thats anime eyes on your kite, Kelley." Me: " You know that, I know that, But she doesn't!"
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Re: Unrequited Love
« Reply #4 on: October 04 2006, 12:13 am »
Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'

i agree, althought i find it to undiscriptive
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From the Spark of Friendship
To the Flame of Love
From sun by day
To Moon by Night
In shadow or in light
My Heart will be Yours
Forever

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Re: Unrequited Love
« Reply #5 on: May 06 2007, 12:49 am »
it's an excellent piece. i like it alot  ((:
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