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Title: Unrequited Love
Post by: FanFiction Bot on July 08 2005, 01:44 am
This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

Unrequited Love (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=3)

Story Description:

Unexpected things exposed leads to more effective results than people can figure. So what will happen if 'he' found out what 'she' has been keeping inside? Love, pain and tragedy...
Title: Re: Unrequited Love
Post by: D.J.P on July 08 2005, 08:40 am
Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'
Title: Re: Unrequited Love
Post by: Alexiel on July 09 2005, 02:00 am
lol, I know. I keep having a problem with that. :P I'll fix it (whenI start practicing keyboard again :X)
Title: Re: Unrequited Love
Post by: AirKitty on September 16 2006, 06:03 pm
Plz keep writing don't let this die!
Title: Re: Unrequited Love
Post by: Kaze no Shikyo on October 04 2006, 12:13 am
Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'

i agree, althought i find it to undiscriptive
Title: Re: Unrequited Love
Post by: `wing-ed] on May 06 2007, 12:49 am
it's an excellent piece. i like it alot  ((: