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Fan Work => CCS Fan Creations => Topic started by: FanFiction Bot on July 08 2005, 01:44 am
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This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:
Unrequited Love (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=3)
Story Description:
Unexpected things exposed leads to more effective results than people can figure. So what will happen if 'he' found out what 'she' has been keeping inside? Love, pain and tragedy...
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Good story.
Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'
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lol, I know. I keep having a problem with that. :P I'll fix it (whenI start practicing keyboard again :X)
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Plz keep writing don't let this die!
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Good story.
Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'
i agree, althought i find it to undiscriptive
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it's an excellent piece. i like it alot ((: