Chapter 1: Scheming
(by Dragon Keeper, added on 2007-07-15 19:41:37 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
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Li Shoaran's Cousin's Description: Okay, I made Ribbon Moon up. Li Shoaran's aunt had a son born a the same time Li Shoaran was born. Except Li Shoaran had auburn hair and his cousin had velvet hair. The cousin's disguised name is 'Ribbon Moon'. His powers are from the rose tattoos on his two wrists. He uses the rose petals to make the saem Clow Cards. Which of course confuses the real Clow Cards. But the real reason why he was named Ribbon Moon was because whenever he does go into fighting, he uses long red, soft Ribbons made out of rose petals. He sounds like a girl right? Well, that's what Ribbon Moon's powers are. Another thing about Ribbon Moon is that, he really likes Eriol, but he doesn't say it out because he already knows that Eriol will like some one else. Ribbon Moon from the beginning of life had the ability to see the future. When he found out that Eriol would soon belong to someone else, his heart ached, but then Ribbon Moon pushed the feeling aside and said that working for Eriol is already a pleasure. his attitude is usually cold and remote.
Okay, now for the story:
In an England in a hotel, were four people scheming a plan. The first one sat in an armchair, the second, looking like a cat, sat on his lap. The third was a girl, who kneeled on the left side of the armchair, while the last one, who was a boy, was on the right side.
“Eriol, it’s about time for you to meet the card captor, but we don’t know whether she is ready to see you or not.†The boy said. The girl laughed, “Oh, Ribbon Moon, our Eriol knows when she’s ready to meet him. Or is it because you don’t trust on what my report said about the card captor?†Ribbon Moon looked at the girl and said, “No, not that Ruby Moon. I just want to see how smart the card captor is.†This time it was Eriol’s turn to laugh. “Oh Ribbon Moon, you’re always going before me to see if things are safe right?†he said rubbing Ribbon Moon’s head. The serious boy blushed at what his master said. The cat-like animal on Eriol’s lap suddenly said, “Ribbon Moon, you’re blushing.†The boy shot the animal a mean glance. “Shut up, Spinal Sun.â€he hissed in a low tone. Eriol smiled. “Alright, you are allowed to again go before me, Ribbon Moon. But Ruby Moon will have to go with you.†He said. “I won’t object sir.†The boy quickly replied. Eriol lifted Ribbon Moon’s face and said, “Good luck, Ribbon Moon.†With that, the two elder people left. Eriol stroked Spinal Sun as he did a soft sigh. [/size] [/size][/size][/size]
Author: Sorry that the chapter was so short, it's just that, I don't have enough imagination to write what I want to write. But I hope that you've enjoyed it.
Chapter 2: Remote Rosa or Sweet Rosa?
(by Dragon Keeper, added on 2007-07-15 19:44:48 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
[B]Okay, so you've just read the first chapter. Now on with the second chapter:
Meanwhile . . .
“Oh, I’m late, I’m late, I’m late.†Sakura Kinomoto cried trying her best to skate on down the street as fast as she could to reach her school in time. Upon arriving at her school, Sakura found out that she was several minutes early. “Phew!†Suddenly a tap came at her back. “Sakura, you look as if you’ve just raced with a cheetah.†Said the voice. Sakura turned around to see her best friend Tomoyo Daidouji. “Hi Tomoyo. No, I didn’t race with a cheetah (duh!). I raced with time.†She replied. Tomoyo smiled and both girls went into their class. Arriving at her desk, Sakura saw Li Shoaran looking ultra-crabby than usual. Meilin beside him tried to cheer him up, but seeing that she did not succeed, she turned back to her own business. “What’s wrong Li Shoaran?†Sakura asked him. No answer. “He seems very upset about something.†Meilin said. “But he won’t answer me.†Sakura tried again. “Is it about your family?†she asked. This time Li Shoaran nodded (finally). After a pause of silence, he said, “My aunt gave birth to her child at the same time my mother gave birth to me. So there was a twin – cousin. However, my cousin went to England. He was being expected at home a few weeks ago, but he didn’t come back.†Before Li Shoaran could speak again, the teacher came in with a beautiful little girl beside him. “Children,†he said. “Today, we have new student.†He brought forth the girl beside him. “Her name is Rosa . . .†many speeches were said for this English-Japanese girl. Her hair was long and velvet, her eyes were light amethyst, but her smile did not show until she saw Sakura. But the smile had a mysterious sign on it.
Author's Note: Is that sitll too short? Oh well, I like making short stories so people can easily see the next chapter. About a few more to go.
Chapter 3: The Secret which is no longer a Secret
(by Dragon Keeper, added on 2007-07-15 20:05:16 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
[B]Rosa's Description: Okay, in the last chapter, you've met Rosa (my made up character). She also has the same velvet hair like Tomoyo, but her eyes aren't as bright as Tomoyo's. Rosa had had a bad life. Her father was an Englishman and her mother was a Japanese woman. Rosa's father was a 'love her and leave her' sort of person. But her mother was a devoting woman. When her father divorced her mother, Rosa felt bitterness toward every single Englishman. Rosa thought that her mother would never marry again, but to her surprise, her mother got married to a chinese man!! Anyway, Rosa's attitude is divided into two parts. The first is the attitude that people usually see and the second is the type that hardly anyone sees. Rosa's easily seen attitude is kind, benevolent, and happy. But her hidden attitude is cold, harsh, and MEAN!! Not many people see this until the end of the story. Rosa also has this scent of hidden power inside. No one can scent it except for Sakura and Li Shoaran. Kero could not scence it, because Rosa had deeply hidden her powers by not using them for now 3 years. Now, you know what Rosa is like. On with the story.
At gym time that day, Tomoyo said to Sakura, "Sakura, don't you see Rosa pretty?" Sakura looked at the new student and said, "Yes, she is very pretty. But something's wrong with her." Tomoyo giggled, "You're very good to scence things Sakura." The girl smiled. Sakura saw that Rosa saw her looking at her(Rosa). She quickly turned away, but she had a feeling that Rosa was walking up to her. She then heard a sweet, bell voice saying, "Hello, is your name Sakura?" The girl soon found herself talking to Rosa. "yes," she answered. "I was wondering," Rosa said. "I saw you the most nicest girl in class, so I wanted to ask if we could be friends." Sakura suddenly smiled and said, "Of course, why not? Oh, this is Tomoyo Daidoujii, my friend." Tomoyo smiled and said, "Hi." Rosa returned the greeting with another sweet smile.
Soon the girls were always going over to one another's house to play and talk. Rosa began sharing her unfortunate life with her mother and father. She said out all her secrets, I mean her deepest secrets. Then after she did, Tomoyo did not hide any part of her secrets. Sakura also told her secrets, except for the Clow Cards of course. Rosa sometimes took them to places that the other girls have never seen before. Tomoyo showed Rosa her secret things that she learned from her mother and Sakura taught her some gym moves. Rosa in exchange taught them some English.
Even though Sakura and Tomoyo were having fun with Rosa, Li Shoaran and Meilin stayed isolate fro her and refused to play with her.
After a few days, Rosa invited the two girls again to her house. They had so much fun, especially the part when they found out that they got a chance to swim in Rosa's large, large pool. The pool was not so deep, but it did reach up to Sakura's neck. Because the girls didn't know that they would be swimming, they had to borrow Rosa's swimming suits. And strangly, the two girls noticed that all of Rosa's clothes were black with weird symbols on it. Symbols that looked very familiar. That day after swimming, eating, and play games, Rosa suddenly asked Sakura, "Sakura, do you have any more secrets to share with us? Tomoyo had said her last secret and so have I." Sakura bit her lip, of course she still had one lst secret. THe Clow Card and Kero, who was happily eating a cupcake in Sakura's back pack. The little girl hesitated for a moment then inhaled.
Author's Note: Well, how was this one? Sitll too short huh? I'm almost finished with the story, but it's gonna have a lot of chapters. Well, keep on going.
Chapter 4: The Scent of Magic
(by Dragon Keeper, added on 2007-07-15 20:21:16 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
Okay, so far you've read it to the fourth chapter. This is getting exciting. Ribbon Moon is my first CCS fanfic. I hope it turns out good.
On the way home from Rosa's house, Sakura saw that Kero was quiet. "What's wrong Kero?" she asked him. Kero said, "You told the secret." His voice was hard and cold. Sakura remembered that she had told Rosa her secret with the Clow Cards.
Flash Back
"I possess a magic that can control cards called the Clow Cards. They have escaped from their real self as cards. And it's my responibility to get them back into cards." Sakura had said. Tomoyo's jaw was hanging loose, she never thought that Sakura would have said that secret to Rosa. While Rosa just looked at her for a minute or two. Then finally smiled saying, "I see this is very important to you. Don't worry I won't tell anyone." She took her fingers and did a cross across her lips. "Promise?" Sakura asked. "Promise, Sakura. Or to make you feel a bit better, I'll SWEAR it." WIth that Rosa did a swear that made Sakura a bit nervous. She could feel Kero inside wriggling with anger.
End Flash Back
Sakura defended herself saying, "but it's not fair for me to hide one last secret while Rosa had said out all her secrets!!" Kero glared at her and said, "Still, you broke the secret with an earthly girl!!" Sakura looked at him and said, "but being friends is sharing one another's secrets to come close to one another." Kero kept silent this time. "Okay," he finally said. "But that's the last girl knowing our secret okay?" Sakura smiled. "Okay."
That Night . . . .
Sakura had a scence of magic in the air. What was it? It was the strangest scent she's ever felt. "Kero," she whispered reaching over to her stuffed friend. But found out that he was already floating in the air. "Yeah, I scence it too." he said seriously. "What is it?" Sakura shaked the sleep out of her eyes. "I don't know, let's just go out and see." When Sakura went outside, she saw that Tomoyo was at her balcany. "Tomoyo!" Sakura whispered. "What are you doing in the middle of the night?!" Tomoyo answered in a hushed whisper, "I saw a silhouette of a person glide by in the moon!" she said. "I'm coming down." And coming down, she did, but she had two things in her hands, a camera and a dress for Sakura to wear. After much fussing around, they finally got her into the dress.
Sakura then went on with the fight. As she was going, she met Li Shoaran and Meilin. They all soon got themselves together at the spot where the scent of magic was. it was on the high tower right behind the moon. On the tower was a boy whose self was black, but in his hand was a red rose and around him were flying red ribbons. "Hello Sakura," was all that he said.
Author's note: Sorry, it's getting late, so I had to go now. I'll catch up later.
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