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Chapter 1: The accident
(by falling_leavex, added on 2007-04-07 15:28:23 AEST) [Discussion Topic]

I do not own clamp.so please don't sue me.

Sakura and Syaoran were walking home from school,a happy couple.They then parted ways and Syaoran kissed her head before saying goodbye.She smiled,then went off.
At least,that was supposed to happen.
Sakura was in a coma,and all because of him.It started when they were walking home from school.They were walking happily and talking.Then he lightly pushed Sakura(he was teasing her).Then she got up and scowled at him.Then they both laughed,unaware of the danger they were facing.They crossed the road,but Syaoran wasn't looking when a car spun and screeched on its tyres.

Sakura pushed him away and got hit by the car instead.And it was in a big blur."Sakura!"he yelled.The driver flung his car door open and said,"Darn!is that girl alright?"so saying,he helped Syaoran carry her out.Then he noticed it:Sakura was bleeding in the head,and she was growing pale.The driver tried to stop the bleeding while Syaoran called an ambulance.

Within minutes,Sakura was transported to the emergency room of Tomoeda Hospital."doctor,will she be ok?"asked Syaoran,feeling agitated."It's hard to say,Syaoran.She's losing alot of blood.She may not survive.Even if she does,she will be paralyzed from the waist down."She told him to call Sakura's parents immediately.He informed them and they rushed to the hospital.Toya threatened to kill him while Sakura's father just looked worried.Syaoran sat on a chair,his head slumped.




Chapter 2: It was fate
(by falling_leavex, added on 2007-05-21 17:37:06 AEST) [Discussion Topic]

Syaoran still couldn't believe what had happened.She had saved his life.Sakura.Why??This wasn't meant to happen.Syaoran wondered how in the world someone so gentle and kind as Sakura could get killed by her own compassion.Sakura was innocent.But why to save his life?Syaoran's head was swirling with questions and doubts.Tired,sweating and still terminally confused,Syaoran fell asleep.

Later that night,Syaoran searched for meaning as he tossed and turned in his own bed.He broke out in cold sweat that trickled slowly down his forehead.Guilt was the only word to describe what Syaoran felt.He couldn't sleep ,he couldn't think.Even hearing his own voice sent shivers down his spine.All he could think of was Sakura,and how he had failed to save her-instead,he had hurt her with his carelessness.He kept blaming himself.Time and again,he had tried to protect all the people who were close to him.Time and again,he had brought death,misfortunes and sadness.

Sakura dreamt that she was in another world and that Syaoran was waiting there for her.But everytime he reached out to hold her hand,her own slipped.Whenever she tried to run toward him,she was on a never-ending run.She was forever running but slipping away,further into sleep.The angel of death had come.

The funeral bells rung,filling the hollow church halls with an empty,melancholic sound that echoed endlessly.Syaoran couldn't believe it.
Sakura had died.

The doctor had told him that she had tried her best to fight until the very end.But still,it was a losing battle.Syaoran fought back tears when the doctor had told him how she talked of him or called out to him in her coma.He promised that he had tried his best.Syaoran hung his head after that.I'm worse that an animal,thought Syaoran.I can't even look straight at any of Sakura's relatives,or....or........her coffin.He choked back tears.

He had refused to go to the funeral.But he knew,even when she wasn't there,that she was with him in the silence,quietly watching over him.




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