English version of 'Tooi Kono Machi De'

[Cherry tiger]

Nyaa... been trying to popularise this little blog of mine where I translate Japanese songs so that you can sing to it. @__@ I'm not sure if you guys understand what I mean but anyways... It's something like what Kay Hearts is doing with some of the Tsubasa songs. ^^

Tooi Kono Machi De

This is where I've put up my version of Tooi Kono Machi De, the song from the first movie. It's not really that great, and I've already recieved a few suggestions on how I should fix it. It'll be great if you guys can help me with this song as well.

Note that I've sung it so that you guys would know how this song is meant to be sung. Look for the link after the lyrics.

If you want to check the whole blog... Here

Thanks for checking it out. Your help is much appreciated. ^^

[Little Star]

Your version is good, I like it ^^   I sing and sing and sing n____n

But the first part I dont like it too much because for me is not good

"Oh, how I just love that song I hear
That's playing on my old radio"

You did a good job!!!, I love the chorus

[Cherry tiger]

Thanks, Little Star! I like how I've done this but I really think it needs a lot of fixing. I've gotten a few comments and I've taken yours into account. Thanks! ^^

[Zeldi]

It was pretty good! I liked the first part
"Oh, how I just love that song I hear
That's playing on my old radio"
And the chorus, the rest was okay.

[suu_no_clover]

YAY! The voice clip is pretty too! You have a much better voice than me, who can't sing for beans.
Can't wait for the other songs you're working on!

[DragonGirl]

You have a very nice voice