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Offline shicho

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Voice Within Remake (ExT Fanfic)
« on: November 26 2005, 11:12 pm »
Voice Within

Chapter 1

A tea party never to forget


A girl about the age of five came running into the garden from her grand mansion. She had short, curly hair of rich plum in color and matching pair of down-turned eyes. Her skin as pale as ivory and a smile that warmed people’s hearts.

Tomoyo Daidouji giggled with happiness as one of her maids, a brunette in her early twenties stood not to far holding an umbrella, preparing to shield the lass from the summer sun.

The raven haired girl was about to play make-believe as she always had every afternoon. Today, she was pretending to be a princess who is holding a tea party for her loyal subjects. She took out her many stuff animals to join in and placed them neatly on a picnic mat.

"I'm sorry my friends." She told her stuff animals, "We're out of tea so we're having hot chocolate. Let's pretend that it is tea okay?"

She smiled and giggled throughout her tea-party. She got up to her feet and grabbed a rather large teddy bear and started to dance with it.

To provide music, the little girl sang in a low but soothing voice.

You're my prince charming, my knight in shining armor,

You fill my heart with joy and laughter,

Oh won't you please stay dear prince?

We'll have ice cream in a bit!

There was a gentle breeze blowing and it seemed that the trees and plants around her were singing along. She took turns dancing with her other 'guests' and sang with all her heart.

To read more. Please visit the following link.

Shicho!

Please review...  :inlove:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2645504/1/
« Last Edit: November 26 2005, 11:28 pm by SLi »

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Re: Voice Within Remake (ExT Fanfic)
« Reply #1 on: November 26 2005, 11:25 pm »
Not TRC, moved to CCS Fan Creations

- And topic titled modifed.

On topic:

Interesting but sad story :D
Keep it up.
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