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« on: November 07 2005, 10:01 am »
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #1 on: November 14 2005, 05:26 am »
Mizumi...

Nice work with your Chobits story. Looking good. I'll re-read it again but it's a good read :)

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #2 on: November 14 2005, 05:42 am »
I really like your Christmas story Arcademan! It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #3 on: November 14 2005, 07:11 pm »
Mizumi-chan, I really love your story... you're too good at writing fics (and stop saying it's not true cuz I'll never finish the manga if you keep doing that...). I'm a little sick today so I won't be scanning the pages, but I hope I can do it tomorrow ^_^

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #4 on: November 19 2005, 12:57 pm »
Eh ^^;; I wrote this story just to show another side of Seto...I had to pull a lot of strings on him though, man it took forever for him to approve

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #5 on: November 23 2005, 02:42 pm »
Not familiar with the character or show but you're showing good writing skills. Keep up the good work :)

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #6 on: December 09 2005, 12:56 pm »
Mark of the Covenant -  Kasawa Lanford

Very good story. Keep up the great work :)

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #7 on: December 09 2005, 01:57 pm »
Thanks :)

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #8 on: December 13 2005, 11:05 am »
How does everyone think of the intro to "Mark of Bachi" ?

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #9 on: December 14 2005, 09:27 am »
I think its awesome  :greengrin: :greengrin:

What do you guys think of my story right now?

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #10 on: December 14 2005, 11:11 am »
All of the current stories here are well done and well-written. The only true thing I find wrong with them is the fact more people aren't commenting on them. They don't know what they're missing :(

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #11 on: December 14 2005, 03:03 pm »
Maybe SLI can make some sort of annoucement or something about these wonderful storys here, and how there missing such great writing  :wink:

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #12 on: December 14 2005, 03:05 pm »
Sorry for not commenting. I have read all of you stories! Kasawa-kun, Arcademan-sama, and Director of Music's fanfics! They are all fantastic, and I love(d) them thoroughly! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more!

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #13 on: December 14 2005, 04:20 pm »
if I was just able to draw better I could really make some of the events I write look better. But I can't  :cry:

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #14 on: December 14 2005, 07:47 pm »
Mine is confusing as hell if you're not familiar on the series.

But it's okay.

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #15 on: December 15 2005, 05:18 am »
It's a tad difficult to understand, but that helps really :keke:

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #16 on: December 16 2005, 01:14 am »
Well, if you have difficulties understanding it just follow the screen shots.

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #17 on: December 16 2005, 04:24 pm »
Thats true

I have a question to those who read this thread.

As you've probably already noticed. My character, Kalshion, is.... quite old (I've had this character for ten years)

Anywho, does it offend you or bother you what type of disguise's he takes? (Age? Perhaps the fact he enrolls in a grade school to hide his Identity)

Also, I already have plans on starting up another story based solely on his children (Sharien mainly, who is seven years old) Do you want to see that story as well? (It's primarily a rated G story, since it will deal with her being in Kindergarden attending a school created by the Dragon Family)

Get back to me please ;)

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #18 on: December 17 2005, 05:50 pm »
If you have spare time. Go for it.

As for mine, I have a hard time on mine.

Typical one...

Shoot enemies, save, die, load save, repeat.

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #19 on: December 20 2005, 09:36 am »
I need more ideas on what the next chapter should be about  :sweatdrop:

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #20 on: January 04 2006, 06:25 am »
Gotta give Robin Sena an applause for your Gradius fanfic! *applause*
I always die in that game, so perhaps now I get the chance to read what I'm missing! :sweatdrop:
It's unique, I havn't seen any Gradius fanfactions before... But then again, I don't read that much either... Uh... :heh:
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #21 on: January 04 2006, 07:08 pm »
I was just browsing and I saw Robin Sena's Gradius and I actually started to read it (shock horror)
Its really Good. I especially like it Because it has visuals aswell.
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« Reply #22 on: January 05 2006, 03:45 pm »
Ehe, thanks guys!

It's hard not to die. God, Gradius III Arcade (current basis for the fanfic) is the hardest of the series.

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #23 on: January 08 2006, 03:29 pm »
Robin...excellent work on your Gradius story and the screenshot visuals are a very nice touch :)

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #24 on: January 15 2006, 10:58 am »
Well, I ended the first one.  I figured if I continued, it wouldnt match the "boring day" title XD.  So on to a new one XD

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« Reply #25 on: January 15 2006, 11:11 am »
Cool. Look forward to reading more :)

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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« Reply #26 on: January 15 2006, 10:27 pm »
Hmm... having difficulties.

I kept dying on Stage 3.

AHHHH!!!

Anyway, I'll add a new fanfic here soon.

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #27 on: March 07 2006, 08:59 am »
argg cmon ppl i need some feedback here XD

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #28 on: March 28 2006, 12:22 pm »
Hmm... I hope my story's good. My first time posting a story in this board.

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« Reply #29 on: May 30 2006, 12:38 pm »
hahaha man, i finally got time to post up another chapter.  Enjoy!  (id really appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback)

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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #30 on: May 31 2006, 11:47 am »
Hmm... Not a lot of people are giving feedbacks here. >_> Did my fic scare them away? o_o

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« Reply #31 on: May 31 2006, 11:54 am »
>.< I just posted a fanfic! Kyaa!

I like yours Hikari-san! It's so cute XD Funny too ^^ Good job.


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Re: General Discussion
« Reply #32 on: July 15 2006, 04:20 am »
I shall not let the Fanfics board be ignored.

I've posted a Harvest Moon: More Friends of Mineral Town one-shot called Cookies. I'd appreciate it if someone read it and commented here. ^^ I can only assume that someone's reading it...

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« Reply #33 on: October 17 2006, 09:39 pm »
*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
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« Reply #34 on: October 18 2006, 07:53 pm »
*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD

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