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Title: 奇妙な子供
Post by: FanFiction Bot on July 13 2005, 02:40 pm
This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

奇妙な子供 (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=9)

Story Description:

He scratched his balding head with a gnarly finger. “He walked into this town looking like that. No one knows where he came from. He doesn’t remember anything, he says. Doesn’t even know who he himself is. Not even his name.” ...
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Okamirei on July 14 2005, 12:35 pm
note: it's not in japanese....only the title is  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: D.J.P on July 14 2005, 06:53 pm
and what does it say? :D
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Okamirei on July 14 2005, 08:57 pm
" a strange child"  :sweatdrop:
I couldn't think of anything else, and chapitre one was already named that, so I thought "this will do...." XD
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: D.J.P on July 14 2005, 09:18 pm
hehe, thanks.

I'm actually surprised that you can use the symbols (yes I can see them :D)
Title: Re: ?????
Post by: Sakaki on July 15 2005, 07:10 am
Great start, Okamirei!
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Lexi on July 15 2005, 07:31 am
Aw~ I feel so sorry for Syaoran :cry:  He sounds so adorable in a depressing way :(

I'm definitely getting into the story! It's really interesting so far. I can't wait until the next chapter! Great job,  Okamirei :okay:
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Alexiel on July 15 2005, 04:21 pm
I think you should make it a bit longer... but other than that, I love it! =3
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Little Wolf on July 15 2005, 08:46 pm
What a catchy title for a fanfic! :keke:

but I guess not all will be able to see the characters... you must be really good in Japanese, okamirei. :wink:
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Okamirei on July 16 2005, 09:32 am
arigato-gozaimasu!  :keke:

I think you should make it a bit longer... but other than that, I love it! =3
eheh, it's only chapitre one!  :keke: I'm thinking about extending it to when Syaoran meets Sakura...might even go further then that...maybe till when Fujitaka dies? =_=; hm...

What a catchy title for a fanfic! :keke:

but I guess not all will be able to see the characters... you must be really good in Japanese, okamirei. :wink:

no, I'm quite a newbie at japanese actually. writing kanjii is the only thing I'm ok with now..  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Alexiel on July 16 2005, 01:15 pm
lol, not that i wanted to pressure anything, just a suggestion! im a newb at writing too you know! so wat i say shouldnt matter in this department. Lol. ^_____^"
Title: Re: 奇妙な子供
Post by: Okamirei on August 07 2005, 02:40 pm
uun..chapitre 2 is so short x_x"...gomen ne.

ah, the reason I posted here is because..I sort of need ideas for the next chapitre  :sweatdrop:
I've got the beginning planned out..but then should I jump to where they head directly to Clow? or should I have them travel to a few countries first?