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Title: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: FanFiction Bot on October 10 2005, 10:46 am

This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

You're Serious, Aren't You? (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=23)

Story Description:

Fai really didn't know when it had started.

Title: Re: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: augustserenade on October 10 2005, 03:10 pm

Oh, great job, Ultima-san! It was very cute! I was impressed with Kurogane's calm reaction and the philosophy behind it! :keke:

Looking forward to future chapters! ^_~

Title: Re: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: Pikari on October 10 2005, 03:42 pm

“You idiot, don’t leave. You just declare your love and then go off to make pancakes?”
For some reason, I liked that line. XD

Really nice story! Is it a one-shot or will there be more chapters? Either way, I loved it. ^_^

Title: Re: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: Hayama on October 17 2005, 11:24 am

Awwww.  That was cute.  Good job!  I just love fluffy Kuro/Fai oneshots.  :keke:
My favorite line (phrase?) was this:   passive-aggressive suicidal puppet  because it sounds like something Kurogane would say and yes, that IS what Fai is half the time.  Again, good job!

Title: Re: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: augustserenade on October 17 2005, 12:25 pm

Ah, I've read the second chapter on livejournal. 'Twas good! Poor Fai... Poor Kuro... They're confused... T_T

Title: Re: You're Serious, Aren't You?
Post by: suu_no_clover on October 17 2005, 01:32 pm

yaay!! That was awesome! A little ooc on Kurogane's part, but Fai was dead on. I can seriously picture him skipping off to go make pancakes. :greengrin: