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Title: Smile
Post by: FanFiction Bot on September 22 2005, 04:01 pm

This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

Smile (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=20)

Story Description:

“You’re going to leave me. And..” She turned her head up and looked straight at his face. “and.. I don’t want you to.” Those last five words scared him and pleased him at the same time.

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: Takeru on September 22 2005, 05:00 pm

Aww, it's a really nice story. I enjoyed it, and I like how you kept the characters' identities a secret until the end, while giving off little hints on who they are. I'm not even a fan of the couple, and I still enjoyed this story. =D Good job.

Verdict: 9/10.

That means you get a cookie. Too bad I can't hand them out. >.<

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on September 24 2005, 02:49 pm

aww.. :heart: thanks for the review~!  :XD:

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: Lexi on September 27 2005, 09:59 am

Oh wow! I <3 this story a lot! It's so kawaii and sad at the same time~~~ Sugoi job, ani-san :okay:  *Please have a cookie :)*

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on September 28 2005, 03:57 pm

aww.. *heart* arigato Lexi-san for the cookie and kind comments about my story!

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: Moon on October 02 2005, 04:44 am

Well written and bittersweet. I loved it! ^__^

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on October 03 2005, 08:18 pm

thank you moonprincess-san! XD

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: bLuetopaz on October 04 2005, 02:59 am

just read your fanfic.. nicely written and sweet.. i really did not realised who the person was until i saw this sentence, "being the daughter of a highly successful business woman"...

i gave your story a rate of 4 out of 5 stars! keep up the good work! :okay:

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on October 04 2005, 04:48 pm

^^ hehe .. it was going to keep their identities unknown til the end .. but i decided to spoil it a bit .. ^^ arigato bluetopaz-san! :XD:

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: bLuetopaz on October 05 2005, 12:08 am

Quote from: ani on October 04 2005, 04:48 pm

^^ hehe .. it was going to keep their identities unknown til the end .. but i decided to spoil it a bit .. ^^ arigato bluetopaz-san! :XD:

you did a great job with it then.. or am i slow?  :keke:

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on October 05 2005, 11:33 am

Quote from: bLuetopaz on October 05 2005, 12:08 am

you did a great job with it then.. or am i slow? :keke:

^^;; no no .. you're not slow .. that was the part that should've given a character away ..

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: Fye-chan on October 05 2005, 07:38 pm

Wow sugoi ne!!!

Title: Re: Smile
Post by: ani on October 08 2005, 03:28 pm

^^ hehe .. arigato fye-[chan]san!