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Title: Slipped Away
Post by: FanFiction Bot on August 24 2005, 10:41 am
This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

Slipped Away (http://www.capturedwings.net/fanfiction/display.php?sid=18)

Story Description:

Syaoran and Sakura are together and everyones happy...right? Nope. Theres one person who isn't...Eriol. He wants them apart. Can he do anything to make that happen? One shot,song fic. The song is from Avril Lavigne.
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: D.J.P on August 24 2005, 11:27 am
So sad :(

- You mean person (j/k)

Very nicely written. No spelling mistakes that I noticed, however one grammer mistake, 'coma' near the end should be 'coffin' I think :D
Keep up the good work, hopefully we might see more from you :D
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: xx_chibirosie_xx on August 24 2005, 03:17 pm
hehe I'm sorry...-_- and yeah...I KNEW something was wrong about that 'coma' thing!! But I could never figure out what that problem was...thank you for correcting me :sweatdrop: so...was it good? Because like...I made you sad...is that bad? Or good? Or what? :XD:

Anyway (:heh:) thank you :keke:
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: D.J.P on August 24 2005, 03:29 pm
who knows, cause I don't  :tongue3:

and you are welcome :D
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: card_master on August 27 2005, 09:27 pm
oh my god,he killed Syaoran,he's a *******.Anyhows,it's great,good job there
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: tato on September 02 2005, 09:58 am
awwwww a very good written story but i actually prefer the ones where sakura and syaoran at the end stand together. so sad story it almost made me cry ohhhh great imagination though!!! jejejejeje
Title: Re: Slipped Away
Post by: xx_chibirosie_xx on September 02 2005, 10:37 am
hehe...thank you :keke:

Quote from: card_master on August 27 2005, 09:27 pm
oh my god,he killed Syaoran,he's a *******
see? hes so ooc, ne?

oh, and me so sorry to all those Eriol-kun- fans!! -_-