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Fan Work => General Fanworks => Fan-Art => Topic started by: Kuro Tsubasa on April 03 2007, 01:21 pm
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Yeah, really old drawing I did in the summer of 2006, and I just found a school scanner, so I thought I'd scan it. No, it's not cleaned, yes, I am scanner retarded.
Yeah, just posting what I wrote on the comments on fanart central:
Bah, this sucks. Not sucks terrible, but still not that great.
Yeah, i drew this picture a LONG, LONG time ago. But I still like it. I finally found a scanner at school, so i scanned it on. Because the scanner screen was smaller than my paper, which is 18"X12", part of the pic got cut off, and the alignment at a place was screwed up, but oh well.
I believe I drew this drawing at around 1 o'clock AM sometime in the summer of 2006, so yeah, it sucks.
Anyways, here's the pic:
(http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8128/freedert006sk0.th.jpg) (http://img337.imageshack.us/my.php?image=freedert006sk0.jpg)
what do you think?
I know I need to work on the hands, but that's just because that's the way the hands looked in the original drawing, so I didn't really bother much more. I changed the eyes because I though it'd make them look a bit more...well, alive. And i wasn't REALLY trying to shade, I just put in 'shading' at places where I felt like it. Oh, come off it, it was 1 or 2 o'clock AM!!
Oh, and please just ignore the smears. I didn't really bother cleaning it up. I may post a new one cleaned, if I have time to clean it.
so...COMSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WELCOMED WITH OPEN ARMS!
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Oh cool. It's Freedert and 'Second Hand' from DNAngel. For me, the most captivating ones are th eyes. They're very expressive to the point that you'll only look at them. The shadings are alright (given the consideration of the time drawn :P). So far, the flaws I can point out is the background pictures (kinda not clear what it is) and the garment folds. There are some places that are "off" due to that fact. The hands are pretty well drawn to me.
Overall: It's a pretty drawing.
I hope you upload the cleaned one, and perhaps 'colored'.
And yeah... *tosses a cookie* Reward for the wonderful drawing :D
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WOW!!!! you made ME go WOW at your work!!!
that's really good!
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Don't sell yourself short. It's a well done drawing and though there are some imperfections, you already realize what they are and in future artwork, will do your best to correct and it will be that much better. Excellent work. Look forward to seeing more artwork from you in the future.
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Thank you for your comments. Well, I have a new scan, it's a really old drawing of hands that I have, so yeah... Here you go:
(http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8792/hands1001lt0.th.jpg) (http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hands1001lt0.jpg)
Click for larger image.
This was a picture I found in D.N.Angel, and since I LOVE hands, I though I'd draw them.
Did this one in early December of 06 in class in less than twenty minutes while trying to take notes in class at the same time, and I didn't really put any effort in drawing them, so the hands are a bit demented, but that's OK.
I know the back hand is a bit twisted, but that's how it looked in the pic, and I guess the person had his hand turned a bit to grip the girl's hand. Oh well.
And as for the worlds...*blush* Um...I kinda just wrote them in cause I felt like it. Just ignore it. I wrote them with my secret agent story in mind, that's why there's a yin-yang symbol behind too. I know that's sort of out a proportion too, but i could care less at the moment.
Well, once again, constructive criticism is welcomed!!!
By the way, i am scanner RETARDED, so PLEASE no comment on how bad the scanning is, OK?
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I'm so incredibly jealous. I must steal your talent >:]
just.. incredible XD
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try hard....just ACM said...
Don't sell yourself short. It's a well done drawing and though there are some imperfections, you already realize what they are and in future artwork, will do your best to correct and it will be that much better. Excellent work. Look forward to seeing more artwork from you in the future.
it will improve your ability skill.....dont give up ok?
my art-work so far is not good, but i try hard to do it best...it will a bit bigger....A2 size scan in 300 dpi, in computer is it over large? Do one artwork must take much time.....sometime i fell very tired...