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Title: General Discussion
Post by: D.J.P on November 07 2005, 10:01 am
This is the discussion thread for any stories posted here. Please read the rules aswell.
http://www.capturedwings.net/forums/index.php?topic=1816.0

Enjoy everyone.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on November 14 2005, 05:26 am
Mizumi...

Nice work with your Chobits story. Looking good. I'll re-read it again but it's a good read :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: moezychan on November 14 2005, 05:42 am
I really like your Christmas story Arcademan! It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Juny on November 14 2005, 07:11 pm
Mizumi-chan, I really love your story... you're too good at writing fics (and stop saying it's not true cuz I'll never finish the manga if you keep doing that...). I'm a little sick today so I won't be scanning the pages, but I hope I can do it tomorrow ^_^
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on November 19 2005, 12:57 pm
Eh ^^;; I wrote this story just to show another side of Seto...I had to pull a lot of strings on him though, man it took forever for him to approve
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on November 23 2005, 02:42 pm
Not familiar with the character or show but you're showing good writing skills. Keep up the good work :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on December 09 2005, 12:56 pm
Mark of the Covenant -  Kasawa Lanford

Very good story. Keep up the great work :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 09 2005, 01:57 pm
Thanks :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 13 2005, 11:05 am
How does everyone think of the intro to "Mark of Bachi" ?
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on December 14 2005, 09:27 am
I think its awesome  :greengrin: :greengrin:

What do you guys think of my story right now?
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on December 14 2005, 11:11 am
All of the current stories here are well done and well-written. The only true thing I find wrong with them is the fact more people aren't commenting on them. They don't know what they're missing :(
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 14 2005, 03:03 pm
Maybe SLI can make some sort of annoucement or something about these wonderful storys here, and how there missing such great writing  :wink:
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: moezychan on December 14 2005, 03:05 pm
Sorry for not commenting. I have read all of you stories! Kasawa-kun, Arcademan-sama, and Director of Music's fanfics! They are all fantastic, and I love(d) them thoroughly! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more!
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 14 2005, 04:20 pm
if I was just able to draw better I could really make some of the events I write look better. But I can't  :cry:
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Robin Sena on December 14 2005, 07:47 pm
Mine is confusing as hell if you're not familiar on the series.

But it's okay.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 15 2005, 05:18 am
It's a tad difficult to understand, but that helps really :keke:
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Robin Sena on December 16 2005, 01:14 am
Well, if you have difficulties understanding it just follow the screen shots.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kasawa Lanford on December 16 2005, 04:24 pm
Thats true

I have a question to those who read this thread.

As you've probably already noticed. My character, Kalshion, is.... quite old (I've had this character for ten years)

Anywho, does it offend you or bother you what type of disguise's he takes? (Age? Perhaps the fact he enrolls in a grade school to hide his Identity)

Also, I already have plans on starting up another story based solely on his children (Sharien mainly, who is seven years old) Do you want to see that story as well? (It's primarily a rated G story, since it will deal with her being in Kindergarden attending a school created by the Dragon Family)

Get back to me please ;)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Robin Sena on December 17 2005, 05:50 pm
If you have spare time. Go for it.

As for mine, I have a hard time on mine.

Typical one...

Shoot enemies, save, die, load save, repeat.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on December 20 2005, 09:36 am
I need more ideas on what the next chapter should be about  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Tessaiga on January 04 2006, 06:25 am
Gotta give Robin Sena an applause for your Gradius fanfic! *applause*
I always die in that game, so perhaps now I get the chance to read what I'm missing! :sweatdrop:
It's unique, I havn't seen any Gradius fanfactions before... But then again, I don't read that much either... Uh... :heh:
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: monkey on January 04 2006, 07:08 pm
I was just browsing and I saw Robin Sena's Gradius and I actually started to read it (shock horror)
Its really Good. I especially like it Because it has visuals aswell.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Robin Sena on January 05 2006, 03:45 pm
Ehe, thanks guys!

It's hard not to die. God, Gradius III Arcade (current basis for the fanfic) is the hardest of the series.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on January 08 2006, 03:29 pm
Robin...excellent work on your Gradius story and the screenshot visuals are a very nice touch :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on January 15 2006, 10:58 am
Well, I ended the first one.  I figured if I continued, it wouldnt match the "boring day" title XD.  So on to a new one XD
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Arcademan on January 15 2006, 11:11 am
Cool. Look forward to reading more :)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Robin Sena on January 15 2006, 10:27 pm
Hmm... having difficulties.

I kept dying on Stage 3.

AHHHH!!!

Anyway, I'll add a new fanfic here soon.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on March 07 2006, 08:59 am
argg cmon ppl i need some feedback here XD
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Hikari B. on March 28 2006, 12:22 pm
Hmm... I hope my story's good. My first time posting a story in this board.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Director of Music on May 30 2006, 12:38 pm
hahaha man, i finally got time to post up another chapter.  Enjoy!  (id really appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback)
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Hikari B. on May 31 2006, 11:47 am
Hmm... Not a lot of people are giving feedbacks here. >_> Did my fic scare them away? o_o
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Fai on May 31 2006, 11:54 am
>.< I just posted a fanfic! Kyaa!

I like yours Hikari-san! It's so cute XD Funny too ^^ Good job.
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Hikari B. on July 15 2006, 04:20 am
I shall not let the Fanfics board be ignored.

I've posted a Harvest Moon: More Friends of Mineral Town one-shot called Cookies. I'd appreciate it if someone read it and commented here. ^^ I can only assume that someone's reading it...
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Rusty on October 17 2006, 09:39 pm
*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD
Title: Re: General Discussion
Post by: Kuro-puppy on October 18 2006, 07:53 pm
Quote from: Rusty on October 17 2006, 09:39 pm
*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD

glad you like it, i put up the 2nd chaptre