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Fan Work => General Fanworks => Fan-Fiction => Topic started by: D.J.P on November 07 2005, 10:01 am
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This is the discussion thread for any stories posted here. Please read the rules aswell.
http://www.capturedwings.net/forums/index.php?topic=1816.0
Enjoy everyone.
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Mizumi...
Nice work with your Chobits story. Looking good. I'll re-read it again but it's a good read :)
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I really like your Christmas story Arcademan! It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Mizumi-chan, I really love your story... you're too good at writing fics (and stop saying it's not true cuz I'll never finish the manga if you keep doing that...). I'm a little sick today so I won't be scanning the pages, but I hope I can do it tomorrow ^_^
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Eh ^^;; I wrote this story just to show another side of Seto...I had to pull a lot of strings on him though, man it took forever for him to approve
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Not familiar with the character or show but you're showing good writing skills. Keep up the good work :)
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Mark of the Covenant -Â Kasawa Lanford
Very good story. Keep up the great work :)
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Thanks :)
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How does everyone think of the intro to "Mark of Bachi" ?
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I think its awesome :greengrin: :greengrin:
What do you guys think of my story right now?
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All of the current stories here are well done and well-written. The only true thing I find wrong with them is the fact more people aren't commenting on them. They don't know what they're missing :(
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Maybe SLI can make some sort of annoucement or something about these wonderful storys here, and how there missing such great writing :wink:
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Sorry for not commenting. I have read all of you stories! Kasawa-kun, Arcademan-sama, and Director of Music's fanfics! They are all fantastic, and I love(d) them thoroughly! Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more!
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if I was just able to draw better I could really make some of the events I write look better. But I can't :cry:
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Mine is confusing as hell if you're not familiar on the series.
But it's okay.
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It's a tad difficult to understand, but that helps really :keke:
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Well, if you have difficulties understanding it just follow the screen shots.
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Thats true
I have a question to those who read this thread.
As you've probably already noticed. My character, Kalshion, is.... quite old (I've had this character for ten years)
Anywho, does it offend you or bother you what type of disguise's he takes? (Age? Perhaps the fact he enrolls in a grade school to hide his Identity)
Also, I already have plans on starting up another story based solely on his children (Sharien mainly, who is seven years old) Do you want to see that story as well? (It's primarily a rated G story, since it will deal with her being in Kindergarden attending a school created by the Dragon Family)
Get back to me please ;)
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If you have spare time. Go for it.
As for mine, I have a hard time on mine.
Typical one...
Shoot enemies, save, die, load save, repeat.
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I need more ideas on what the next chapter should be about :sweatdrop:
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Gotta give Robin Sena an applause for your Gradius fanfic! *applause*
I always die in that game, so perhaps now I get the chance to read what I'm missing! :sweatdrop:
It's unique, I havn't seen any Gradius fanfactions before... But then again, I don't read that much either... Uh... :heh:
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I was just browsing and I saw Robin Sena's Gradius and I actually started to read it (shock horror)
Its really Good. I especially like it Because it has visuals aswell.
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Ehe, thanks guys!
It's hard not to die. God, Gradius III Arcade (current basis for the fanfic) is the hardest of the series.
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Robin...excellent work on your Gradius story and the screenshot visuals are a very nice touch :)
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Well, I ended the first one. I figured if I continued, it wouldnt match the "boring day" title XD. So on to a new one XD
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Cool. Look forward to reading more :)
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Hmm... having difficulties.
I kept dying on Stage 3.
AHHHH!!!
Anyway, I'll add a new fanfic here soon.
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argg cmon ppl i need some feedback here XD
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Hmm... I hope my story's good. My first time posting a story in this board.
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hahaha man, i finally got time to post up another chapter. Enjoy! (id really appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback)
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Hmm... Not a lot of people are giving feedbacks here. >_> Did my fic scare them away? o_o
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>.< I just posted a fanfic! Kyaa!
I like yours Hikari-san! It's so cute XD Funny too ^^ Good job.
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I shall not let the Fanfics board be ignored.
I've posted a Harvest Moon: More Friends of Mineral Town one-shot called Cookies. I'd appreciate it if someone read it and commented here. ^^ I can only assume that someone's reading it...
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*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD
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*falls off chair reading Kuro-puppy's fanfic.*... its so silly and funny and random!!!
hand over the next chap!!! XD
glad you like it, i put up the 2nd chaptre