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Unrequited Love

Story Description:

Unexpected things exposed leads to more effective results than people can figure. So what will happen if 'he' found out what 'she' has been keeping inside? Love, pain and tragedy...

D.J.P:
Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'

Alexiel:
lol, I know. I keep having a problem with that. :P I'll fix it (whenI start practicing keyboard again :X)

AirKitty:
Plz keep writing don't let this die!

Kaze no Shikyo:

--- Quote from: SLi on July 08 2005, 08:40 am ---Good story.

Grammer and spelling was ok, however I suggest you fix up 'the', you have it written 'teh'

--- End quote ---

i agree, althought i find it to undiscriptive

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