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Princess Kayla:

--- Quote from: Takeru ¥amamoto on May 15 2005, 11:10 am ---Is there anything I can improve on, especially?

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Hmm...the only thing I see is that it was hard to tell what exactly the focus was on in the video.  (It's hard to tell in my Hero video also.)  Also, the final scenes you used, Sakura facing Madoushi, seemed to be just a big chunk of the movie put into your video.  Maybe you could mix it up a bit.  You know, add some more editting to that part.

I hope that helps.

Takeru:
Hmm, yeah... well, I was trying to make it as linear as possible... and yeah, even I don't know what I was focusing on. I guess I was just trying to recreate the story in a short video.

Princess Kayla:

--- Quote from: Takeru ¥amamoto on May 15 2005, 12:42 pm ---Hmm, yeah... well, I was trying to make it as linear as possible... and yeah, even I don't know what I was focusing on. I guess I was just trying to recreate the story in a short video.

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Yeah, I totally understand.  That's what I tried to do with my Hero video.  Yet, I got a lot of reviews on how the focus was really bad on it.  That's why now, with my Be Your Girl video, I tried to create a main focus.

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