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Ando:
What exactly is it that you need help with? Of what you've done of Fai's part, I think it looks very good. Especially at the "I just can't let you go".
Are you having trouble finding enough footage? In the Chaos Arc there might be some good clips of Ashura, since Bee-Train had Fai battle him in one episode. If it still isn't enough, maybe you could add some clips of Fai looking sad/wistful.
A few suggestions unrelated to your request: at 00:58 we see a shot of Sakura to the lyrics "you'd still be here". This shot is followed by her and Syaoran together, but Syaoran fades away. That makes it seem as if he's the one who is gone, but the first part of the video is supposed to be from his perspective and not Sakura's, right? Or have I misinterpreted things completely?
Kurogane's part I find the most moving. At 2:01, again with the "you'd still be here" we see a shot of Kurogane's father, and although our ninja surely misses him, I think it's his mother's death that he blames on himself the most. Perhaps showing her at that moment instead would make it even more touching?
Then, at 2:05 there's an adolescent Kuro against a very bright yellow which takes away some of the feeling. It's such a bright yellow... I think you should replace those clips, or make them black-and-white.
Lastly, I'm not a fan of flashing videos, so I'd say it'd look better without all those effects. However, I do think it'll be very good once finished. The song really fits our heroes!
Kazemon15:
Well I need help with the chorus that's coming up next....>< ...not enough clips of Fai and Ashura.....hmm...maybe the yellow is a bit bright...I'll try to fix that...as for the Kuro part...well, I was trying to go in order of how they died..^^;; .....hmm....for the Syaoran part....well, true, but if you think about it...I think I was going for "you'd still be here" ...as maybe.....as he himself, would still be in her memories....does that make sense? ^^;; Thx for advice though....I'll look into the mistakes heh.....but I need more ASHURA CLIPS! >< ....or at least some Fai clips for the chorus.....which clips?
Edit: Finished Their Perfect World.
Kazemon15:
Teaser...click to see new project in works
Also, need help...anyone know where I can get chapter 123 of Tsubasa? The download link doesnt work anymore and I seem to have losted 123 off the face of my comp O_o;;
Teaser part 2...thanks you Ando, Suu_chan for chapter 123. ^^ And Znuese (Znuese.deviantart.com) for letting me use cool color scan
Takeru:
Wow. Just wow. I just started watching your stuff. Great choice of music, masterful editing skills. I love how you mix manga pages with anime footage, and the way you do it makes it flow really well. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. =)
Kazemon15:
Thank you so much. ^^ Im glad you enjoy it...I try to make it good so ppl can enjoy well made AMVs. I'm almost done with Destination Darkness, just need to wait for more scans. ^__^
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