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FanFiction Bot:
This post is for discussion of the fan-fiction:

Journey To The Past

Story Description:

A mission in time, to save the past, present, and future.

Arcademan:
Nice start, however you may want to space out your sentences since the entire story looked like it was one long paragraph. Once you space it and paragraph it, it'll look cleaner and I promise, you as well as others will find the same words more enjoyable to read.

Look forward to more :)

AirKitty:
Thankyou Arcademan, I'll keep that in mind ^-^

AirKitty:
:sweatdrop: I'm working on the second chapter, I'm gonna try proof writing it on Microsoff word, to make
it look better (and not so many spelling mistakes)!  :homework:

AirKitty:
:D Woot! Chapter two is up! And it's realllll long ( well to me anyways, it took up four pages on Microsoft!  :heh: )

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