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[CHO] Chobits Fanfiction: Don't Love Me

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Mizumi:
CHAPTER X. SPY
She lays her head against his shoulder, sobs gently. “Oh, Riko-chan…” He lays his hands around her slender shoulders.
“Ssh… Calm down, Mizi, there’s nothing to cry about…”
“There is,” she mutters, “there is! Riko-chan, I… I… I love you! There…” He smiles happily.
“Then why would you cry? Hey, girl, I lo…”
“Do not say it!” she calls. “Don’t love me! How many times do I have to yell it before you finally understand it?! DON’T LOVE ME!”

“Let us in, robots!” Neko screams, bashing the door the persocoms have locked behind them when they’d run in. Neko and Hideto, though, are still outside.
“We are not robots,” Ameiru calls, leaning against the door to keep it closed. “And you are the one who is stupid here! You really think you can stop fate?!”
“Fate doesn’t exist!” Neko calls. “Y’know what?! I’ve had enough from you, so shut up!” She turns on her button, and Ameiru collapses. Neko and Hideto run in immediately.
“Lead us to Mizumi or the same thing will happen to you,” says Hideto threateningly, pointing at Ameiru.

“I don’t understand it,” Riko says, “the others told me that loving you was the only way to help you out, and you tell me the opposite! Who do I have to believe now? Or…” He bends his head. “Do you prefer a life as a persocom above a human life? Because then, I’ll leave you alone…”
“I do not know what I want anymore,” she whispers, “I want to be with you, I want to be with my friends… I want an existence without crashing, but I do not know whether or not I want to be a human girl. Once I have changed, I will never be able to turn it back. This decision is for the rest of my life.” She sighs deeply. “Do you understand me now, Riko-chan? Do you understand my confusion? If it was not for the fact we are in Nepuchun-sama’s force field, I would crash right now, just because of my confusion about all of this…”
“Wait a minute,” says Riko suddenly, “this field prevents you from crashing?!” She nods gently.
“Yes… what…” He grabs her shoulders, forces her to look in his eyes.
“Then there’s nothing to hold me back from saying… that I love you, no matter what.”
“Riko-chan…”
“THAT’S ENOUGH!” A voice yells. “GET DOWN, YOU TWO! NOT ANOTHER WORD FROM EITHER OF YOU!” They both look down, see Neko and Hideto standing in the room. Neko’s holding her index finger against the button as if it were a gun.
“Neko? Hideto-san?!” says Riko astounded. “What… hey, what’s happened to your ears, Neko?”
“Over here,” Neko grins, waving with her ‘ear-band’. “It was the ideal disguise to spy Mizumi, y’know. Now come down!” Mizumi looks gloomily at the floor, closes her eyes; then, she and Riko gently land back on the floor.
“I knew it,” she whispers, “I already knew it when I saw you for the very first time…”
“Pity, but it’s too late now,” Neko grins, waving with her case. “This will shut you off forever, persocom. You will never turn into a human girl, and neither your friends will.”
“NO!” Riko calls. Mizumi’s hiding behind him scared and he puts his arms protecting in front of her. “Don’t you dare to touch her!”
“I won’t touch her, I’ll just shut her off,” says Neko calmly.
“That’s what I meant! Don’t you dare!”
“You don’t understand it, Riko-kun,” Hideto says. “When Mizumi turns into a human, the other will have that opportunity as well when they also learn how to love. That’s the most irresponsible thing to do.”
“You don’t understand it!” Riko calls. “I trusted you, Hideto-san! You knew it the moment you bought those series, so why on earth have you bought them then?! And why did you fire Mizumi, for heaven’s sake?”
“Those were my ways to the plan to stop them all to become what they’re made for,” says Neko, “now get out of my way.”
“NEVER!” Riko suddenly takes Mizumi in his arms. “No matter what, Neko, Hideto-san… no matter if it’s her programming that activated these feelings, but I love Mizumi with whole my heart!”
“You don’t even know her long enough to love her without that programming,” Neko says, “so if you help her to turn her into a human with that fake love, the biggest disaster ever will strike. Now get out of my way!” Hideto suddenly pulls Riko away from Mizumi.
“HIDETO-SAN! I TRUSTED YOU, YOU WERE MY FRIEND!”
“Sorry, buddy,” he mutters. “Go ahead, Neko.” Neko nods, directs her case into Mizumi’s direction. The persocom’s standing there beaten, doesn’t even avoid the beam coming from Neko’s push on the button. Riko glares at her as the beam hits her.
“MIZI! NOT YOU!”
~*~*~

CHAPTER XI. LOVE
“What the…” Neko rams on her button. ”She should collapse now, just as that Ameiru-com!”
“Riko-chan…” Mizumi mutters. Her ears starts to glow, and suddenly, she starts floating again.
“YOU HAVE TO CEASE TO FUNCTION!” Neko calls, still ramming on her button. “Stupid persocom! Die! Cease to function, never talk again! You may not transform!” Mizumi closes her eyes, floats immobile through the space.
“Riko-chan loves me… and I love him, too… He says he does not care if it was my programming that made him fall in love with me, so that means he will love me without it, too. My curse… will finally change into my true gift…”
“NOOO!” Neko screams, ramming her button, throwing the case on the floor and tap-dancing on it. Mizumi’s ears glow so powerfully that everybody has to blind their eyes; the next moment, her ears suddenly explode.
“MIZI! Are you alright?!” Riko calls, unfastening himself from Hideto’s grip and running to her. She opens her eyes slowly: they first seem blank, but then, they merrily sparkle.
“Riko-chan!” She falls down, down into his arms and smiles at him as he embraces her.
“Mizi… you’re alright, aren’t you?”
“I’m better than ever,” she shines. “And you know why? Because I love you, Riko-chan, and now I’m a human girl and I’ll never have to crash again ‘cause of my feelings. Unless…” She looks into his eyes. “Are you still in love with me, Riko-chan? Otherwise I’ll have to die…” He swallows, looks at the girl in his arms and feels all looks on him. Hoping looks from the persocoms, cursing looks of Neko and Hideto who probably wish him to say “I hate you” rather than “I love you” to Mizumi. And he knows what his answer will be, now and forever.
“Well, that I was in love with you was all caused by your programming,” he says, “so I’ll have to say… No. I’m not in love with you.”
“You’re… not?” she whispers, grabbing his shirt terrified. He smiles.
“Let me finish my sentence, girl,” he says. “There is a stronger feeling than being in love with a person… That’s loving a person… loving so deeply that it’ll never pass, no matter how long you know each other.” She looks happily at him.
“So… so you mean…”
“Yes, Mizi.” He smiles, strokes her cheek. ”I love you.” She embraces him.
“I love you too… I’ll never, ever say “Don’t Love Me” anymore, I swear…”

The persocoms all cheer and start clapping: Ameiru’s come round again now Neko’s destroyed the case with the button. Neko, who’s looking very frustrated at the happy couple.
“Oh, no… all our effort… all our work to stop it, and it all was for nothing…” Hideto looks at her.
“Chin up, Neko, it’s happened now. Just be happy for that couple, okay? Now, let’s go, we have some important stuff to talk about.”
“Oh?” He smiles.
“Yes… hey girl, don’t you want to get married after being engaged for more than four years now? You’re twenty-three now, that must be old enough!”
“You’re right,” she happily smiles, “yes, you’re right, Hideto… Let’s get married…” She looks into his eyes. “But what about your restaurant? It’s always been your greatest wish to have something like “Crystal Dragon”!”
“Well, I was hoping the persocoms would forgive me and still would like to work at my place,” he says, “and if they won’t… well, I’ll manage everything with you by my side, Neko.”

“I can not believe it,” Herindera grins, “now Miz is a human, we can be one too if we find love!”
“Yes…” Kiria blushes. She thinks about that customer, that one who keeps asking for her… her look goes dreamily and Ameiru doesn’t miss that.
“Oh… seems like our Kiria is going to be a human soon, too,” she chuckles. “What is his name, Kiria?” Kiria deeply reddens.
“He is just a customer who asks for me to serve him,” she mutters, “his name is Kadimo…”
“Just a customer, huh?” Ameiru grins. “If I am not mistaken, that is how Mizumi and Riko started, too! Tell me all about him!” She merrily puts an arm around Kiria’s shoulders and asks everything, from the colour of his eyes until his favourite food.
“I must have a boyfriend, too,” Herindera yells. “Hey, RIKO-SAN! You do not have an attractive brother or something by accident, do you?”
“Well, I do have a brother,” Riko merrily calls from above, with Mizumi in his arms. “I could arrange a meeting between the two of you, then you can decide for yourself whether he’s attractive or not.”
“Deal!” Mizumi laughs because of Herindera’s reaction, looks into Riko’s eyes with a blessed look.
“Riko-chan, I want to show you something,” she says, grabbing his hand. “Come.”
~*~*~

Mizumi:
CHAPTER XII. HAPPINESS
She suddenly starts floating again, drags him along in her flight. “It’s up here,” she smiles, “in the ceiling. It’s so beautiful…” She takes him higher and higher, points at one of the stars. “You see that star, Riko-chan? Shining brighter than the others?”
“I see it,” he says, “It seems blue.”
“It doesn’t only seem blue, it is blue,” she chuckles. “Just a bit higher, then you can touch it.” Riko looks down as they reach the star: the persocoms down look as small as ants.
“It’s higher than I thought,” he says. She nods.
“Yes… Fear of heights?”
“A bit,” he confesses. She smiles.
“Yeah, me too.” He looks astonished at her.
“And then you dare to float this high?”
“You forget your fear when see it… Ah, we’ve arrived.” The ‘star’ is as big as a football, beaming and deep blue. “You can catch it, too,” Mizumi says, taking the ball in her hands. “Come on, touch it if you dare!” He smiles, lays his hands on it.
“Warm,” he says, “gentle warm…”
“I know… there’s a story that belongs with it, do you want to hear it?” He nods.
“I’m hanging on your lips.” She chuckles.
“Heehee, okay… well, you see, Nepuchun-sama didn’t have his odd name for nothing, and he didn’t create this space for nothing, either. He loved astronomy… He changed his name himself and made this room with the entire universe, starting with the same
‘star’: Nepuchun. Neptune, the Blue Planet. His favourite.” She smiles. “He also loved maths… That’s how I got my numbers. He created me as seventh one: seven, known as the number of luck. He gave me my second number for development: thirteen, known as the number of bad luck. Together they’re harmony… Thirteen, seven, together twenty. The amount of moons he himself spotted around Neptune. Two and zero makes two: Neptune is the second planet counted from the outside of our solar system. Plus, of course, he created twins for me to be my daughters. And…” She lays his hands on his, that are still lying around the ball. “He wanted me to be with someone, someone just as precious for me as astronomy and maths were to him… He wanted me to be with that person, just the two of us… Two…” It’s silent for a while; both Riko and Mizumi let the little planet go, and it floats just a bit above their heads.
“Well, not a full moon, but it’s still romantic,” she giggles.
“Yeah… ehm… Mizi?”
“Yes?” He lays his hands against her cheeks.
“May… May I ki…”
“Allow me.” She lays her hands against his cheeks, and suddenly, she kisses his lips. From far beneath them, he hears applause and cheers; then, he’s completely absorbed by Mizumi and his love for her…
~*~
“Oh, come on!” She calls. “Why not?!”
“Because this is my apartment maybe, in case you never noticed before!”
“Yeah, and they’re my daughters!” Riko sighs deeply.
“So what?”
“I want to have them close to me!”
“You still work together at “Crystal Dragon”, for heaven’s sake!”
“I want to have them with me after work, too!” she calls. She puts his arms around his neck. “Please, Riko-chan! They’re my baby-girls! I’ve seen them developing from the beginning of their creation!”
“If they’re your baby-girls, then who’s their father?! … Oh, never mind,” he sighs, “you want the four of us to be a happy family, don’t you?” She nods merrily. “Oh, fine! I’ll see what I’m gonna do tomorrow, when I’ve brought you to your work.”
“Thank you thank you thank you!” she cheers, kissing his cheek.
“Yeah, yeah, it’s fine,” he grins, “as long as you don’t want to adopt the other ‘coms as well!”
“Maybe Herindera…”
“NO WAY!”
“Just kidding!”

“Haven’t seen you for quite a while,” Hideto grins as he sees Riko.
“Yeah, last time was yesterday, so long ago,” Riko smiles. “How are you doing, Hideto-san? Still happily married?”
“Hey, what would you expect?” Neko chuckles, appearing from behind her husband. “I’ll be right back, Hideto, they need me in the kitchen.” As she walks off, Hideto looks at Riko.
“Honestly, I’m surprised by those ‘coms,” he says, “that all of them – and you, of course – were able to forgive us… and they even got friends with Neko! Anyway, are you just dropping Mizumi here or is there a special reason you’re here?”
“She wants to take the twins into my apartment,” Riko sighs. Hideto chuckles.
“You may have them… Neko and I hardly have any space upstairs with eleven ‘coms walking around.”
“Ah, well, without the twins it will make eight, you can survive that,” Herindera grins, passing them.
“Who learnt you how to count? A toddler?” Hideto says, furrowing his eyebrow. “Eleven minus two is still nine, y’know.”
“I know,” Herindera shines, “but eleven minus three is not!” She looks at Riko. “After Mizumi and Kiria, I will be the third one to move out here and find luck elsewhere… to go live with the guy who loves me enough to turn me into a human. Have I already thanked you for introducing me to your brother, Riko-kun?”
“Eh… Any time,” Riko mutters astonished. It’s silent for a while, then, Hideto suddenly says:
“hey, why don’t you guys just get married? I mean, how long have you loved each other now? Two, three years?” Riko looks up.
“Who? Mizumi and me?” Hideto sighs.
“No, Santa Clause and you,” he says, “of course Mizumi and you, who else!” Riko blushes.
“I…. haven’t thought about that yet.”
“Maybe you should, then.”
“Yeah…” That moment, Mizumi runs to them.
“Great news! Saka and Jira would love to move in with us,” she yells, “and have I heard it well? Is Herindera truly gonna become my sister-in-law?”
“Then the two of you should get married first, Mizumi,” Hideto smiles, pointing at her and Riko. Mizumi chuckles.
“Oh, we eventually will of course,” she shines, “won’t we, Riko-chan?” He looks at her, merrily puts an arm around her.
“Yes,” he says, “yes, we will…”
END
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This was Don't Love Me, thank you if you read it!
I'm sorry it took so many posts to complete it :heh: ah well. Hope you liked it!
I've also written a songtext but I'm not sure I'm gonna post that...

Mizumi

Mizumi:
Songtext
OK, I decided to post the songtext anyway... please don't laugh, I'm not that good in English poetry and I'm not sure my spelling is correct.

Somewhere deep inside me
I feel that burning fear
Fear of what’s gonna happen to me
If you will finally appear

Would you like me, treasure me
As if my life was yours?
Or would you just abandon me
And throw away what’s ours?

So I can’t do anything but say
DON’T LOVE ME
From the moment I see you
I have to keep carry on this way
However future seems so true
That you and I should love each other some day

When we met I immediately knew
How much you and I would go through
Someday, both of us flew
Through the space where wishes came true

But I know, this may not happen
For both of us, it’s the best
It is the moment I’m going off, when
I realize something else’s the best;

So I can’t do anything but say
DON’T LOVE ME
From the moment I see you
I have to keep carry on this way
However future seems so true
That you and I should love each other some day

But now is the moment I finally see
That saying that phrase isn’t the best
So I grab your hand, take you on with me
To tell you just a simple thing;

No matter how much I say
DON’T LOVE ME
You know it isn’t true
And you will always remember
How much the both of us went through
And I will say
DO LOVE ME
And we will carry on that way
Because fate’s been changed, and so it’ll always be!

Images
I'm not the greatest artist ever, but here are some drawings:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24786966/
OK, thatone's horrible... I've just remembered why I don't like to draw guys. I simply can't.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/22766391/
Mizumi - not that good but I like her face.
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs7/i/2005/259/4/0/Don__t_Love_Me_Chapter_I_by_marinachan.jpg
So I cut out her face and coloured it.

That's it! ^_^

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